by RetroRavey Jul 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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A burn across her face, |
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Not my favorite of yours, but the ending was beautiful. That really made the poem. |
by Jessica
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Well, i didnt really understand this.. but that is probably just me.. hehe.. it flowed well and the descriptions were good. nice job! 5/5 |
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Gorgeous. |