Being free

by charmed_one   Jul 23, 2006


I really wish that i could be
one of those people to set you free
to take your pain
so you would gain
i would love to set you free

When you are in a darker time
i\'d love to make the stars shine
shine just for you to see
how easy it is to be really free

i know you think your not that strong
but you will be before to long
then yourself will truly see
just how great it is being free

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  • 17 years ago

    by Krisanta

    Well Done.. I liked it. _krisanta_

  • 17 years ago

    by put the [boom boom] into my heart

    Theres a few grammatical problems and the rhyme scheme is a little off in the first stanza, but easy to edit...VERY good poem, i really like it a lot. Great idea and its put together very nicely. good work xo

  • 17 years ago

    by LostForever

    Hey, i liked this poem it had a nice flow to it.
    and u said u couldnt write them!
    xxxxx

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