Awwwwwww! This is just so sweet. Your choice of language is expressive enough to show how you feel without being cliched.
Lovely warm and fuzzy poem

I like this poem alot,,, and really like the way you wrote it too...

I thought that this poem was pretty good! You messed up on a lot of spelling and there were a few words missing! I don't think there was a great flow to it, although I do think that it was a really good topic

-AnnMarie

Awww! This Was Really A Cute Poem! The Emotion In The Poem Was Good And The Flow Of This Poem Was Ok But Other Than That The Way You Described It Was Brilliant 5/5
Love,
Steph

This was okayy.. i dont mean to be critical but i found the flow didnt work and that really threw me off.. other than that, your descriptions and details were beautiful and made the imagery really work.. nice job.. if you fix up the flow it would be perfect 4/5

Cute, and not too unoriginal, like most love poems seem to be these days. It stayed on topic (according to the title) and had a nice ryhme. Good job.

As always~ Kate

Great poem! It's nice to see you are in love. What a wonderful feeling it is. Excellent poem as usual, keep up the good work.

This was good and well described but i would have liked it better if it rhymed lol its really good though :):):) xxx alex (:(:(:

I love this. it's fantastic. the flow is a little choppy, but otherwise it's good! 5/5