Wow.
Amazing absolutely amazing.
I love it.

Very nice. You kept to the strict syllable count really well. Everything flowed well together also. I've never tried one of these, but hope to soon. Wonderful job. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very nicely done... I liked the format and it was a strong, yet short poem. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow this is amazing! It is so powerful, the structure and the words fitted together really well making a big impact. You did well with the syllable count because it didn't sound restricted when I read it... if you know what I mean lol. Well done 5/5
Polly

Wow, great style,
you are a great poet, and now one of my favorite

You have an amazing talent for writing dear. your poems are so sophisticated and very well written. 5/5

I liked it but it should have been long like u culd have made in loner but i liked it 5/5

Omg that poem was amazing!!
Another new style of poem i'll have to give a go, i love reading poems in different styles it makes me try new things, i doubt i'll be able to do one as good as this though.
This is definately 5/5 the imagery was brilliant and vocab was great!!
Well done.