Make you he know that you really do care,
[I think you meant 'sure' in there]
and that you will never play
[This was a poor line...Too overly used with every other poem.]
to some love is a dream,
[This line was perfect.]

In other words, I enjoyed the poem. Trying to write a love poem for me is extremely hard and never turns out to what I'm feeling.. Now I know why. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Hey, this is really good and so true...great write indeed
very deep thoughts expressed

all the best and take care
5/5

I liked the emotions in the poem.

I thought it was well written

Wow. well that is incredible. Again, not at asll what i expected from it. It really makes you think. it defines love in a way no one else i have seen has and overall it's bloody good.

Jem

This is a unique take on love and life-very emotional and eloquently expressed.As criticism-stanza #4 the last line seems awkward, especially since you already used the rhyme 'play', perhaps something like 'and that you will always stay'-just a thought.Stanzas 1, 3, 5, 6, & 7 are truly outstanding-very well written, but it is the meaning and the emotion that really shine through.Really, a great piece.Very heartfelt and beautiful.A realistic yet emotional look at love.

Gary J

I really really like this poem...like I felt some of the stuff you were saying

I loved that poem! it waz so damn real and true, unlike some otha pplz they dont make since at all. i hope u keep writing cuz ur really good!
much luv from yo gurl
~!*Peachez*!~

I liked trying to read the poem. :)

Heyy, well just returning the favor.
you're poem speaks the truth. love it!

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That is soooooooooo awesome!! i LOVE it *haha*
thanks so much for the comment!
really well written, keep it up!
kat
xox

Awesome poem..thanks for the comment on my poem, love chrissie xxx

I really could relate to this poem and i would like to say nice work, you do have talent....

Interesting opinion on what love is. I really like it because it includes all views on what love is and not just the views of someone in love or out of love. Once again, amazing! :D

Good poem. God's love is true love & humans can either love or have true love that has been handed down to us by God.

Really good, keep it up.:) later.

Marvelous Poemm. Hahah I mean Nice Poem person. Just sayingg. Okaybye.

Ohh wow..
thats like really good.
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Ohh wow..
thats like really good.
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Ohh wow..
thats like really good.
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Lovely you have a tallent