Sour Suicide With Acid Tears You Cry

by Emmah   Jul 27, 2006


I'm consumed in nothing but fabricated lies
Standing on the edge of my bittersweet demise
Your words plague my thoughts;
Whilst you haunt my dreams
I'm drowning in my own darkness
Shame is seeping through my tears
Dead and broken deep inside
My pain never seems to subside
Insanity slowly takes over my mind.

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  • 19 years ago

    by b r i d g e t

    You truly hve a talent
    ure poems are very relatable n youre style is really good... keep writing it helps x

  • 19 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Hell yehh.. thats awesome aye.. i LOVE all ya quotes, that what got me reading these.. they're awesome, ya hav some talent hun
    XxX
    LoNeLY. . .

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    Dead and broken deep inside
    My pain never seems to subside
    Insanity slowly takes over my mind.

    ^^I loved those lines. wow.

    This was a pretty good poem. Though I did think it could have a little more added to it, but then again I do like it the way it is. I thought you used excellent vocab. A great write. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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