Oh wow mel! That was really gd! Excellent point of view.

5/5

Luv Niquee
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That was really good..sad to think that stuff like that actually happens.

Thats really good but sad

~bre

That is brilliant!! u r truly a great poet!! rather sad tho..hope it didn realy happen to a little girl 5/5
love clo

Wow thts really sad......i lik it alot...it makes me cry though...a 5/5 for me..

That was a great poem 5/5. one of the lines that realy stuk to me was
black are my eyes
bruised is my skin
hurt are my feelings
i know i cant win

it remined me of a book about a girl whos dad abuses her. Baster out of carolina. good book.

That just grabbed me right in...you really cant describe the thoughts in your head as you are reading it but i really think you got talent

Dang how do u write such good poems? i could never have as much talent as you!!! 5/5

Omg that poem is AMAZING i love the flow of ur words in it 5/5...my dad does that to but....he isen't drunk he's just always like that:(
auna