Lovers In The Dark

by loretta Taylor   Jul 29, 2006


Hearts are pounding
Deepest longing
Touching, caressing
Slowly undressing

Feel your kiss
Untold bliss
Sweet and tender
I surrender

Lovers responding
Intimate bonding
Flaming desire
Trails of fire

Sensations cascading
Primitive mating
Joining of two hearts
Lovers in the dark

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Quite cute, and there are many ways to understand this poem, which makes it exiting.

    Love,
    Wings of an Angel

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oooh, these are my favorite types of poems. Short lines that convey so much.
    Your flow is flawless and the imagery is mind blowing.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-the imagery in this piece is amazing! I like how the lines are short, yet are filled with a lot of emotion---Your word choice is perfect and expresses the passion in this poem very well---Great write!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I simply love it... It's an amazing write. You also let your poems flow and run about freely; great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Loretta --
    I really liked this poem, good thing it`s featured. Personally, the flow in the first stanza was the best. The other stanzas were pretty good flow wise, but not as good. I didn`t dock you for that, though. The rhyming was a lot better and more predictable in this poem ;; good. Nice job, it`s been nice reading your work! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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