Lovers In The Dark

Quite cute, and there are many ways to understand this poem, which makes it exiting.

Love,
Wings of an Angel

Oooh, these are my favorite types of poems. Short lines that convey so much.
Your flow is flawless and the imagery is mind blowing.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow-the imagery in this piece is amazing! I like how the lines are short, yet are filled with a lot of emotion---Your word choice is perfect and expresses the passion in this poem very well---Great write!

5/5

I simply love it... It's an amazing write. You also let your poems flow and run about freely; great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Loretta --
I really liked this poem, good thing it`s featured. Personally, the flow in the first stanza was the best. The other stanzas were pretty good flow wise, but not as good. I didn`t dock you for that, though. The rhyming was a lot better and more predictable in this poem ;; good. Nice job, it`s been nice reading your work! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood