Killing Me Off

by BlackOctober   Jul 29, 2006


Lock me up,
dont ever set me free,
just tell me you love me,
and throw away the key,

Keep me underwater,
dont let air fill my lungs,
Drown me in your darkness,
destroy what i've become,

Take away my happiness,
don't take away my heart,
wash away the best of me,
tear whats left apart,

Please just make me hurt,
break my down,
take my smile,
replace it with a frown,

take away my love for you,
Dimmen my eyes,
Lock me away,
ignore all my cries,

do whatever it takes,
to make it so WE never excised,
end us with crimson kisses,
end it wrong and twisted.

p.s.(I wrote this poem,its not all that good but i like it.so comment me please!!!!!!)

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  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I really like htis poem. its amazing... i kno how u feel thats how i feel. i love hte rhtyhm the flow and the word choice. its amazing. u have such talent so keep on writing. great job 5/5
    take care
    angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    I really like the rhythm uve put into this poem. good job ;).

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