Niceway to make a person aware of the mistakes commited.

just a suggestion: in the 4th line of 1st stanza plz use "break" instead of "brake"

take care. bye.

I think it is a great poem to let people read to apologize for a mistake, or to someone is still trying to get over one.

This poem meant a lot to me, i really loved it. if you have time hit me back and please add me cause i'm going 2 add u. xoxo

I really like this poem!...i like almost all ur poems..they are very good..in fact im gonna add you

Very well written, and very true. Well done. xx

Wow.. such a well written, and very powerful write! well done, very insperational and oh so true! you have talent.. keep writting..please read and comment on my poems, thanks... Kirsty Palmer xx

Nice. i really liked the beginning.

I really loved this poem, its not everyday someone makes a mistake and a kind hearted person is ablt to say "its ok, you never meant to hurt anyone". this poem really meant a lot to me. plese continue writing! and stay safe, strong, and healthy (and tell the person this is about to do the same)
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Wow i love this poem! its all true! you are a really good writer!

I hope you know why I read this, and I believe it’s not about me.
But I hope the one you wrote this for is living just a little more free.
And I’m sorry if I bother you, I don’t mean to be those flies.
That return every summer, to try close your open eyes.
And if you only take one thing, just one thing away from this.
It is that I’m sorry, and not every sorry should be dismissed.
Although 99.99% of mine should be detoled.