A Gem

I don't know why i never commented on this - i know i read it earlier. i especially liked the first stanza, and the last five lines are both succinct and meaningful. i wish you wrote poems more often, so i could read them....

"You said to me
that maybe all the
feelings you felt
were a lie based
on the sweet words
that fell through the phone."
I absolutely love that verse.I love the way you've set it up, in kind of...kind of like incomplete sentences (?),but in a good way.
Ya, I really like it.

Wow..
"It's a gift, all I can give:
a small diamond of comfort
you can put in your heart
in exchange for the place
you have in mine."

I love this.. Hey, I love it all, but this part is amazing. Well done. xx

This is so good, I adore you for fellings this way for someone. My fiance just broke up with me, and I'd give anything to have him feel like you do. Please read and comment on mine

Hello!
That was the nicest read ive had in a while.
You should give that to the girl it was dedicated to.