More than an Angel

by Bradley Peter   Jul 31, 2006


My world is incomplete
if you're not there
like trying to live a life
without breathing air

no words can express
my feelings for you
except you're beautiful
that at least is true

no angel could possess
the beauty you hold
if god seeked perfection
round you he would mold

heaven isn't heaven
if you aren't there
heaven is like hell
wrapped within despair

and yet hold you i do
how i do not know
but the nightmare will begin
the i let you go

that day will be dark
and i will cease to breath
that day i will die
the day you choose to leave

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Sry 4 da multiple posts my computa froze!!! xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Thank you, it's an absolutely beautiful poem, not true but beautiful all the same.
    I'm sorry I was just upset bout the wednesday thing cos it jus seemed lyk a definite arrangement we could take advantage of, nut I understand why you don't want to go.
    By the way you haven't got to woryy about losing me or me leaving you because I love you too much for that to happen.
    love you loads and loads and loads,
    Bethan xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Thank you, it's an absolutely beautiful poem, not true but beautiful all the same.
    I'm sorry I was just upset bout the wednesday thing cos it jus seemed lyk a definite arrangement we could take advantage of, nut I understand why you don't want to go.
    By the way you haven't got to woryy about losing me or me leaving you because I love you too much for that to happen.
    love you loads and loads and loads,
    Bethan xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Thank you, it's an absolutely beautiful poem, not true but beautiful all the same.
    I'm sorry I was just upset bout the wednesday thing cos it jus seemed lyk a definite arrangement we could take advantage of, nut I understand why you don't want to go.
    By the way you haven't got to woryy about losing me or me leaving you because I love you too much for that to happen.
    love you loads and loads and loads,
    Bethan xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Thank you, it's an absolutely beautiful poem, not true but beautiful all the same.
    I'm sorry I was just upset bout the wednesday thing cos it jus seemed lyk a definite arrangement we could take advantage of, nut I understand why you don't want to go.
    By the way you haven't got to woryy about losing me or me leaving you because I love you too much for that to happen.
    love you load and loads and loads,
    Bethan xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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