I really loved this poem...I think it was a different style than what you usually write but it was beautiful. A little sinister yes but still sadly beautiful. I loved it, really. Great job.
5/5
Breanna

Don't appoligize for them being dark they are beautiful...I really love them all...and if you haven't noticed most of my poems are dark. lol
II loved all of your new poems.

***appologize...sorry xD

I wish i could do that to him....=D

Wow..... y would some do tht....but its really good though and its really dark..i lik it....5/5

Hey I mention you in my profile now xD Thanks for all the comments on my work. (^_^)

Wow this hit me hard.
its really good.
thanx for commenting on mine.
-steph

This poem is fantastic, its written with beautiful emotion and i love how your able to do that! Keep writting poems, I look forward to reading them as soon as i switch my computer on!