Twenty-First Year

by jessel jane   Aug 2, 2006


*To (Ate) Jean's 21st Bday

Looking back to the past...
and how it made you "You".
You found your way back home at last;
when dreams are coming true.

It's been your twenty-first year;
and days just seem so fast.
You passed some roads;you faced your fears;
and did the things you must.

You know the simple things in life;
this world has lived to tell.
You taste the pain; the grief and strife;
and managed life as well.

Your smile inspires a lot of friends...
your words have touched some hearts.
Your eyes say things no one can tell;
they speak what's in your heart.

As you go on through your way...
in life's utmost quest.
May you reach your dreams someday;
as you strive to do your best.

So close your eyes for a moment...
then take a breath so deep.
And say your silent wish and prayer...
a treasure you must keep.

We wish your dreams would all come true;
and joy may come your way.
We wish what is the best for you...
happiness in every way.

*happy birthday to u

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is really good some poems have this thing about them that no one should say how to improve because it will spoil their work.

    this is one of them poems its YOUR work and only YOU should suggest things to fix it otherwise it wont be your poem if you know what im sayin

    lovely poem though :):) keep it up xx

    would you comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as i can get :):) thnx xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    Not bad not bad at all!!
    I really like the ending part.