This one's so sad, and I liked the way you really shared your point of view and your thoughts with the reader.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Aaww sweetheart!! uughh NO NO NO !! NO!!!! whats this about?? sweetheart ur too thin as it is! everyones looking at u and thinking "gain weight, beautiful!!" please dont think 4 pounds is a big deal..its a GOOD start!!!!!!! PLEASE dont think this way about urself!!!

This is really good , and a serious subject If only we could all see its so much more important what were like on the inside. [easier said than done]

This is a different one for me...I like it.

I know what this is like, i have a few poems on the subject too. It's really heart breaking to see that so many girls are trying to fit into the standered that is set so high for us, but you really captured the thoughts of someone dealing with such a body image, i really hope you're ok.

--Steph

Wow......well thts sad......but if she trys to loose weight do it the rite way........a 5/5 poem for me keep on writing!

=(

It's so sad I almost don't know what to say. I find Anarexic or Bulemic people are too critical about their weight, and image that it's almost too much to bear for themselves. Good write though. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

VERY nicely said.. I'm not sure what to say, but just wonderful.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5