Dear Goran,

you have taken yourself to a higher level through this poem. i am happy to choose u as one of my favourite poets. wanna hear more from u. i think v both have something in common. u can read my poem WORDS and then ADDICTED to find it out. take care.

Short and sweet lol.

Nothing much to say really...flow was good, lines were about the same length and rhyming scheme and rhymes were chosen well. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

To see your beautiful smile,
I will cross a border.
I will fly like a bird,
As it is my heart's order.

I loved the rhymes in this stanza...not yor ordinary rhyme thats for sure! I really thought this was a beautiful poem! Great Job!
-Krissey

A very nice package..this short and sweet poem

Wow Goran you wrote yet again another lovely poem. It was beautiful.

Great job, very sweet poem. I'd like to see more imagery, flowery words and descriptions. Keep it up

Awe, that was so cute. You really conveyed your emotions in this piece...good job. 5/5 =D

I really liked this poem, You did a great job with it!
Sorry to say it made me sad, but that could just be because I'm jealous of the girl with the beautiful smile. haha

No matter what the world say.

^^Maybe you should re-word that line. It could work better if you added 'would' or 'will' after world.

Otherthan that, I thought it was a good poem. A little short, but it got to the point! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Awsome i get what u mean ur great writer!

=]

'I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world says.'

I love how You ended this poem.. It shows just how strongly You feel about the person You are writing this for.. well done 5/5 xx

Goran, lovely poem you penned here, though short but well express emotions....

In the ocean of love, Everyone is a voyager, Traveling to the island of romance, On a vessel that would never collapse. Everyone flows with the rhythm of life, Burning sensation felt in the heart, Will guarantee eternal sweet delight.

Awwww........this poem makes me smile..idk y....but ur such a awsome poet!! a another 5/5 for me

Very well written...flowed beautifully...

Loved the ending yaar...very nice very sweet....5/5

Ahhh.. this was a good read in deed..
could be one of your best.
5/5

This poem is beautifully written!

Your polem is really really goood!
you should write heaps.... your a pro!!

Awesome!!

Good confession;)