Wow such a sad, and powerful poem, it was well writen, and flowed beautifuly.. i loved the title! very eye catching! keep it up 5/5..please read and comment on mine.. thank you ..kirsty palmer xx

Hey i like it : ) good write 5/5

I liked it a lot. the image was great and the way u used the words was amazing

Aww.. i just loved it.. its sooo sad and it just broke my heart.. i cant even pinpoint a fav stanza coz evry stanza is more beautiful than the one before it... very powerful, yet so desolate.. short, but u got ur point across...
beautiful and so heartfelt..
keep it up
take care
NannO

p.s. thnx a lot or ur comment on my poem.. much appreciated

Wow! such a depressing poem....just ABSOLUTELY beautiful...kepp up the good work!!:):) 5/5

Hey well done, but really sad,. Good use of language. excellent flow and rhyming, keep it up, Love
~She died Screaming