Suffer

by only_me   Aug 3, 2006


You think that i don't have a heart, because i didn't cry outside like you did.
but i can feel the pain even more than you,
i can suffer, i can cry...
...even more than you
because i can cry inside of me every day
and you can't see it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    First of all this isn't the poem this is a short story. It isn't bad but it could be better. Topic is excellent but you could use some metaphors to make stronger atmosphere. This piece could be longer and emotions aren't greatly expressed. This one needs many improving.

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