Ooh this one really tingled the spine especially the ending. Wonderful vocab and rich imagery.
Brilliant
5/5

You never cease to put out great writes. this is another great one. youre an excellent writer.
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Omg, another great poem by a great poet, keep it up and best job again

Nice.
5/5
had a good story and your rhythm was well used

Wow...awsome poem i luved it and it is sorta lik my name to....and i can relate sooo its awsome!!

Absolutely PERFECT! I love this one just as much as your other dark poem. Great write. Yet again.

That was seriously one of the most powerful poems i've ever read!! i loved the last 8 lines the most! the whole thing was so poetic!! 5/5

Wonderful, I liked the pearl part and the God's Kiss. That was surprising.

This poem is so symbolic, i love it. i personally love the symbolism of angels who have fallen. i love this poem, big thumbs up. -bri

I love this poem. Very deep.

I really like this poem, good work. I look forward to reading your other poems.

Aww. It's so deep with emotion. I loved it! Flow was excellent (more than I can say about most of my poems >.< ) Great write! 5/5 xoxo

'It was God's kiss.'
That was an amazing poem with a strong last line! Keep it up :P you should go pro

"With tear streaked faces,"
[With 'a' tear streaked 'face']
Only so it rhymes better...

Seems like you have something for or against Angels to write about them so much. You mostly write of them being broken or dying. Which makes good imagery, but for some reason I just dislike that. I guess it's because I'm somewhat religious. Oh well, another interesting poem.

Very interesting...I loved it!