Her end

by silent eyes   Aug 7, 2006


It's hard to find the truth in all these lies
All the pain hidden behind her eyes
She doesn't know fact from fiction
So little praise, so much conviction
Her poor little heart torn to pieces
While her hope slowly decreases
She prays hard for a better life
But she resorts to using her knife
She cuts here and a little there
She's in so pain, so much despair
She finally puts the blade to her wrist
She cuts deeper, she can't resist
The blood comes,her life goes
All that pain,now everyone knows
She leaves a note for family and friends
To tell them this was her end.

( i did this in 5 mins. PLEASE tell me any errors or criticism PLEASE!! )

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hind

    She doesn't know fact from fiction
    So little praise, so much conviction
    that was hot...love the way it just flowed together...5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Meg

    This was an extremely well written poem good job i gave it 5/5!