Fighting

by courtney   Aug 8, 2006


I want to feel the rush of passion,
I want to love you,
And have you love me,
I'm tired of being your little sister,

Show me what it feels like,
To know you can never leave there arms,
I don't think she loves you,
But you know i do,

Fighting for love,
Fighting for friendship,
Fighting for you,

You have to choose,
Me,
Or her,
Nether are going to be happy,

Were fighting,
For love,
For friendship,
For you,

pretty bad shes my own cousin right
With the tears i have cryed,
Trying not to love you,
Trying to hide my feelings,

I dont want to make you choose,
Im sorry i gave you up,
But that was my mistake you see,
I love you with all my heart,
And im sorry for these tears i cry

not real good but i let off steam

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Psh, i thought it was good
    this is really deep, i could totally relate... keep it up, im lookin forwqard to reading more of this great stuff!
    love
    tina
    < 3

  • 17 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    It's very easy to turn this into a really good piece of poetry.

    Break it into equal sized stanza, develope the word play a little and instead of venting, turn it into something more, turn it into a flowing piece of emotion.

    You have the base and it's solid, just build on it some more and you'll get something that everyone can identify with and enjoy.

    Bret

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