by Willow Aug 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Paint me a picture, |
by unblue skye
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Wow... powerful... it kept meh reading!!!! great job!!! |
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This one is great! |
by Oceansoul
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Normally i don't like the use of so much repetion in a poem , but you made it work very well, and it just made the poem work , |
by Corey
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I enjoyed the usage of repeition of a word/phrase at the beginning of each stanza...they way you made the repeated words portray alterior ideas was magnificent |
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I loved the was that you finished your poem with a stanza already used it was a good ending not rushed i did think that the repitition in this poem was working well it showed potential well done xxx alex xxx |