The little miracle...

by berkeleyboy   Aug 10, 2006


I am sitting under the shade of a tall oak tree looking up at the sky...
Then the Campanelli suddenly rings to tell me it's ten o'clock
it's time for class
I only have ten minutes...

but I keep sitting there staring at emptiness,
I get the feeling that I should move
that I should hurry
but I don't
I just sit there motionless,
I close my eyes...

When I open them it's no longer blue,
I am no longer looking up but straight ahead
out a window...

To the right I see a guy,
he is looking at the ground,
talking to himself...
then he takes out something from his dirty jacket
and stares at it for the longest time
as if waiting for it to talk back...

I glance to the left,
I see the open ocean
no ships around
no clouds
nothing
and then a bird
one single bird soars through the whole sky
it is as if the ocean and the sky were only there for it to fly

and then in the middle of both...
I see a tree...
and under the tree lies a boy

he isn't talking
nor is he wondering around wildly
he is just there
doing nothing...
just looking up...

I wonder, what is he looking at?
and just then something red falls from the oak tree and the boy raises his hands to catch it.
it lands softly...
what is it? this thing that he was looking at for so long...
he brings it closer to himself
and now I can see...
that red object that had caught his attention for so long
that thing that has made everything around him meaningless...

freedom...
wealth...
the boy doesn't care...
he just sits there looking at the rose...
the small miracle that fell from the emptiness

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  • 18 years ago

    by berkeleyboy

    Thank you...
    for someone like me to grasp just a little of what love is really about... it's truly a miracle.. ^_^

    but i can't let go...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Nice job..i loved this..very deep and well written 5/5 keep it up!

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. this poem, is like s hort story, but it is very effective and well written, i loved the title too. There is so much to this poem, and i thought it was a good idea to sum it up here! great write 5/5..would go higher if i could lol..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..best wishes Kirsty palmer xx

  • 18 years ago

    by berkeleyboy

    This poem is about a guy who becomes drunk with love.
    He falls asleep under the oak and dreams that he is looking at himself out the window.
    The old man, the bird, and the boy under the tree are all him: his future, past, and present.
    He realizes that he will become an useless homeless person if he doesn't move on, but he still chooses to keep that little miracle we call love.
    there is lots to this poem.. that's why it's so long... and weird in a sense XP

    and in case you didn't know...
    oak trees don't have roses... that's why it is a miracle that a rose fell from it. haha.

    comment on this please.
    thank you.