Wow, i really liked this and agree with it wholeheartedly.

I totally agree with you.. people always seem to want to read between the lines like there has to be something hidden there! any.ways.. your poem has a great message.. and it's beautifully written!
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

Wow. this is an amazing poem that really shows that sometimes poetry isn't always about what we're doing, it's more of how we're feeling. 5/5