This is a very interesting write.
Dark is deffinatly your style, but that doesnt mean that theres no room for improvement. This poem had strong words...but i felt like it held no deep meaning...and that kinda threw the whole poem off...otherwise i loved the flow and the words, Good Job=D

Omg, that was amazing.. it was beautiful and yet so sad.. the descriptions you used were so powerful and brought tears to my eyes.. wonderful work! 5/5

Hmm I don't mean to be harsh but falling and dying angels is a bit cliche for me. Yes, you wrote the poem well but the subject just didn't do it for me, sorry. Also, you capitalise "angel" in this poem therefore I can't understand why you haven't done so on the last line of the first stanza.
Thanks for sharing anyway, sorry I couldn't be more positive.

Great flow in this poem. I never though of using crawl and fall as rhymes. Great! The next step would be to add more imagery and try to use bigger words for rhymes and so on. Keep it up

Ohhh. Lovely poem it was really dark. I actually enjoyed it.
"Pick them off the floor
As dying Angels crawl,
Pick them up as the tears pour,
As dying Angels fall."

AMAZING Lines I loooove that stanza. It had so much power and emotio9n. Great Write Hun.

This had nice rhythm and flow but I feel it lacked passion. Hate to be negative but I know you are capable of much stronger work.
Still the vocab and imagery were good.
4/5 (sorry)

Ooo. Dark poem. Lol. I liked this poem, even though it wasn't one of your better ones lol. The rhymes were good, but in a few places, the flow seemed a little forced. Great job. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I liked it reminds us all there there are angels walk with us and sometimes even an angel can fall thanks for sharing

Awww that was soo cute and sweet..and i loved it! none of the rhymes seemed forced, it was a great topic! great job 5/5

You're trying to hard to make it seem dark and depressing... besides it doesnt make much sense either. i dont know where you're coming from and what the meaning of this poem is supposed to be.

This poem is very beautiful in a sad unique way, I loved it....I pictured the whole poem in my head while reading it...Great job, excellent =0)

Much Love Sabrina

Dropping one by one,
These Angels cry,
Dropping as they're gone,
These Angels die.
This was an amazing poem with lots of detail. It is very enticing seeing your view on angels! I loved it!

Wow.. that is really good. And also creepy lol.. it gave me chills. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it held up well and the imagery that you had in this was amazing. I like the whole concept, I always love poems about angels. You did a great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!