Aw, wow. That was really sad. A really good poem though. It all flowed really nicely. Excellent job. 5/5

Natalie``

Aww Wow. SO Good....Keep it Up -xxxxx-

Ah, wow. That was a really good poem, although sad. The ending...kinda caught me off guard.
5/5 - Love your work!

Good work, really discribes the pain of breaking up.. nice!

Aww it was awesom! love it all the way right up to the ending..its sad tho! hope ur doin alright! ttyl
-hayley

Wow. Very nicely written it was really sad brought tears to my eyes. Lovely write Dear.

"of cause I know, how could I not
((course))
Nothing around by silence
((but))

I enjoyed reading this poem... And the ending was great. The poem flowed pretty well, up until the end or so. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This poem is awesome... good job

Hey hunny, glad you're still talking to me. I'm sorry for not commenting much recently but i've been so unhappy. I'm ok now, I'll be fine. Great poem as usual :)

This poem...oh my...
I had to go through this...nearly word for word...My boyfriend took it hard when I told him those things...man...wow...

Awhe, that brought tears into my eyes. It reminds me of something that happend in my life recently, very nice job.

Awww...I love this poem! It reminds me of my horrid past, and its sad something like this could be so true. Great, emotional write!

Awh, that was soo sad.. Wow, I loved the twist at the end.. I always find poems with them so much more exciting! Wonderful work hun! 5/5

This poem is very good 5/5! i hpoe you write more like this one!!

Hmm, dun really get wot u mean by untrue? well, do tell me sumtime...

Awwww..this makes me cry a lil......awsome i lik it alot..