We are fallen

by VYXSIN   Aug 14, 2006


The night falls without a sound, soulless are we.
the understanding for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
devoured by madness.
all hope must sicken and die.

your love is no more.
how could you cause such hurt?
demons surround us, crying,
we are fallen.

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Strong poem, great choice of words

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was good. I agree with the unfinished statement... but it was a great write. The way it was written was very good. And the concept was great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    It feels unfinished, perhaps make it longer. The flow was just ok, it was not the best, I have seen better from you. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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