Outside the Asylum

Short, but with an enormous amount of emotion, simply loved it ;)

This is beautiful. Short, but straight to the point. You have took the simplest words and turned them into a masterpiece. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Letty

Very well written poem you have here.
i really like it a lot.
i think it would be even better if you added more to it.
but it's fine just the way it is too.
keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Short and sweet, it would be really cool if you added on and turned it into a very nice piece..Hey thanks for commenting on my song..it means a lot:D!

I can relate to this one alot..it's sad but touching all at the same time. you wrote it very emotionally, great job! 5/5