Awh Taleee, I loved this poem Hun. I can't seem to write poems like this .The syllable count always gets me. I loved how it was written it was really sad and well writen. :]

Your grandmother must be really special and close to you... keep strong and smile! you dont want her to see you sad :D great poem loved the words! keep writing!

~angel~

A very nice poem that i really enjoyed reading, and a 5/5 poem that was written perfectly.

Awww, taleee.. This made me cry.. The flow was perfect, your descriptions were beautiful.. They described everything wonderfully and the love under them was strong.. Keep up the excellent work, Ily! 5/5

Thts sad....i liked it alot......a 5/5 for me!!

Yeah it shows that you really love her and this poems decribe the true feeling of a grand child and loving grand child and then feelings here shows that your a good person then
nice flow and rhyming great job overall this is what the poem are

Thanks
Geneross

Nice poem with good flow... Very emotional. Wonderfully written!

Very nicely done... I'm sure it had to have been hard to write that, but you did it nicely. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This was really good. Im sorry about your grandmother also, I know what it feels like to lose a loved one.

I adore the style you used. I tried it once... never did it again lol. Excellent write though. 5/5

Outstanding example of this format
The content was very moving also

This is beatiful... and i really like the way u write very unique so keep on writing i really enjoyed 5/5
god bless and takecare

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's very sad and it gives the perfect description of grief. The second stanza really painted the picture for me:

Stranded here on earth without your sweet guidance,
Loved ones weren't given the chance to say goodbye,
Nor could they replace the joy from your presence.

Those are the words that pulled me deeper into the reading of your poem. Excellent job. 5/5

Letty

P.S. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry in the very near future.