Great poem. To know that a man can feel that way about any girl is a keeper.
-SilentxSoul

A splendid poem Robert. Excellent write.

Best Wishes
Michelle

I think this poem its absoloutely great!! Keep up the good work.

5/5

You are one amazing poet. You never cease to amaze me. You have warmed my heart with the simplistic beauty of your words.

This is a very precious poem. Very beautiful!

"For, you are, a most enchanting thing."

^ I think ti would have more impact if it went like :

"For you, are a most enchanting thing"
or
"You: the most enchanting thing."

But either way, a very beautiful poem indeed. You certainly have a way with words!

Wonderfully Worded!

Again i say commas. i read the first line of this poem and didn;t even finish because of your incorrect use of punctuation. use thoughts from your heart and your mind to say what you want, not what you think your english teacher would appreciate. you've got lovely worthwhile things to say being strangled by english grammar.

Your words are inspiering. Not much more I can say, lost for words. :)

I like tha way u wrote this 1

I thinl this is absolutely amazing!!! Very inspiring and romantic!