I Just Fell in Love Today

by Rebecca N   Aug 16, 2006


I just fell in love today
my heart beats the way the wind blows
my heart is filled with the suns rays
and all of the city's flowers grow

Have you ever felt light before?
that's what I'm experiencing
my little life is growing poor
but my heart is beating more

he will love me forever
I will love him longer
people think it's weird we're together
to me I think it's romance

You and I go together
like bees and honey
we were meant to live forever
with everyday so sunny

have you ever feel in love?
well, you might today
I did, you can
I just fell in love today

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  • 19 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job I agree with the stanzas rhyming but I do that sometimes too but great job I loved it 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney

    P.S. If you ever want to e-mail me, go ahead. My e-mail address is on my profile. YAY! Nah, I'm not gonna make you look there. (lol) It's kiwiflavouredsmartie@hotmail.com! =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney

    This is a great poem. 5/5 My only suggestion is to keep the rhyme pattern the same for all of the stanzas, because it makes it easier to read. I like how the last line is the title, though. This is awesome, for your first piece! Keep up the awesome work. Much love.

    -*La Little Lor Lor*

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