Love on wings, fairies are we..
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I thought this line could be changed abit. Maybe if you said "faeries we are.." cause "are we" just doesn't really click for me.. I dunno. It could just be me.

Really nice Sedoka though, Jessy! And I love Faeries aswel. They're so pretty. Tehe. Excellent job for such a small poem. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Yeah dude the last line

if you change that line it could be a great piece the flow are broken by that line

but then still great just alittle bit comments and that it is

thanks
Geneross

I love this poem..mainly b/c i love fairies..and tinkerbell omgggggggg i just love her =D...i want to be a fairy one day..hehe but until then i guess i will just love them..this is by far my favorite poem that i have read in along time..i just LOVEDDDDDDD IT! great job babe. 5/5

Thts is a cute poem i liked it alot!!...a 5/5 for me!!

Aww. I loved it. =) Not much to say...but I loved it! Lmao. Great write hun. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

YAY!! Love it sooooo much! Me+Fairies+Other Imaginary Stuff=5/5! (If it's written good) Which yours is! Nice write!

I loved this poem. I love fairies and the beauty behind them. I someday hope to get a fairy tattoo. ^^ Comment on mine sometime -- Meg

I LOVED THIS KEEP IT UP 5/5

Good work.

lovely imagery and flow

keep it up!

sophie:)

ps thanx for the comment!

Nice job! This poem flowed beautifully! Keep it up!

Very calm innocent poem. This could..with more details..go into the fantasy section.