Broken heart

by victoria   Aug 16, 2006


I walk around school with laughs and cheers,
but on the inside its all broken up with sad bloodstain tears,
you said you loved me but then you lied,its like you were trying to make me commit suicide.
You broke my heart once before,and now look at me,I'm just as dead as i once was before.

(this is to billy,who i loved,but guess what hes a jerk and is nothing to me at all.)

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  • 14 years ago

    by shayla

    This is a very good poem
    i love it
    i can compare to this poem :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    A great work... I loved it but the pain inside...!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Its not normal poem style.. but like the way u put ur own style ... i liked the words in the poem even though it ws kinda sad, but yea good work... i think i shuld talkin... lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Skriptz

    You could really feel the emotion out of it, and really a relationship isn't worth dying for
    theres always a better guys out there you just gotta find the right one

  • 18 years ago

    by elmahdy

    Nice words, very sad and full of emotions. well done

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