Vast Obscurity

by Levi   Aug 17, 2006


Unable to flee,
Lost in the vast obscurity,
That which consumes me.
My dreams have lost their purity,

My soul has become empty place,
Yet my thoughts are all but gone.
Every breath is just another waste,
My heart and soul are so torn.

Hope is all that I have left,
Forever has gone and still to come.
If I were to die it would be for the best,
But not until the unalterable fate is done.

*I was really bored in class so I just started writing and about 2 minutes later i had this...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    It's really good, I like it. So maybe you can comment on a few of my own?
    thx

    -Gypsy83