Great poem and I know that feeling all too well. Pleasing the people you love is hard, and it's even harder to keep them pleased. But still, you can never give up and hurt them in any way. Keeping how you feel hidden for the happiness of others. I have to deal with that too. It can drive you crazy. Awesome job though and good luck with all that.
Steph

Wow...thts long...wow and its true 2...a 5/55 for...keep on writing..

Noni-- This has to be one of your most emotional pieces. I loved it! I can relate alot aswell. =P

It's so sad though. You should always fight for what you want out of life hun, don't let anyone choose how your lifes gonna be like for you. mmkay?

Very good poem though. It was amazing! Awesome job. Keep it up! 5/5 Ily.

Natalie``

Aww that is sad, I was the same growing up.. wanting to please everybody, but it made me ill in the end and i ended up hurting the same people i so desperately tried to please for years.. You need to do what makes You happy, otherwise it is all worth nothing.. anyway this was a superb poem, it had a lot of emotion and was very well written.. great job 5/5 and good luck for the future xx

Omg, this was so sad... The flow was excellent, the words and descriptions you used were perfect and amazing, and the emotion was loud and clear.. Excellent job hunny! xx 5/5

This is a great insight into your life and written with clarity and skill. Amazing poem. I have no complaints for this.

Sarah White

Very long, but very worthwhile. it's rare you find a poem so long that keeps you interetsed from start to finish. i really enjoyed reading this. brilliant work : D

WOW! I can relate to alot of these parts. just not the whole thing. it was sad and I am just speechless. I can not come up with the right words to say about this. it just blew me away, completely. Yes, it was a bit long. but that does not matter it was brilliantly written. great great job! 5/5

-Breathes heavily- My god.. Long poem.

But great job... Amazing emotion, very strong. That's what you want in a poem. You should a bit like me.. Great job expressing that, even though this isn't your best, because of the emotion in it, I give you what you deserve.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This is an awesome poem 5/5 you deserve no less. i can feel the emotion through the words, the rhyming was excellent, the flow was nice and smooth. Great Job 5/5

The greatest thing about true stories/poems are the fact that readers can often relate to them. It's awful to know you're sad about something, but you can really make people smile when they read something like this and know they are not alone. I'm really amazed that you kept the rhymes going on this one. Great one Noni!..

Great write. Many readers can certainly relate to your poem... just remember one thing... live your life for YOU and not for others but live for others because you love them and know that they also want the best for you. Great write! 5/5

Hey! Changed your name again?? Well, Noni, once again you show an unparalleled ability for insight into not only your own mind, but the minds of each and every one of us. Well done.

This poem inspires me.

Very ... wow... i'm speechless 5/5

So much pressure, and no one knows it....sad but it happens...keep going. Good poem, it was such an unusual rhyme scheme. I really liked it! Jpoet*