Aww man! I don't know anything about sonnets but that poem was sooo sweet and I loved it! Beautiful & sweet!

Nice poem !
very well written :)
i liked it !

Another great job by you.
it is very enjoyable

I like it.. Really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.

Wow great one I like it the ending was great just keep writting girl no matter how busy you are..

Great job. I liked the way you did the format for a sonnent then keep your poem flowing 5/5
-Vino

That was really good...i cant do that good, but yeah 5/5

Thanks so much for the critique. I think people should really point out ways that poems could be better. That's what the club and this site are for.

The poem is great by the way. I really liked it. I feel like a hippocrit now because I can't point out anyway to make it better. Great job.

Your rhyme scheme does not match with that of a sonnet.

1-abab cdcd efef gg
2-abba cddc effe gg
3-abba abba cdcd cd

I liked this. you are such a beautiful poet

Aww that poem is SOOOOO sweet! i like it! ^_~ thats going in meh favs for sure!!!!! great poem! it touched my heart!!!
5/5!!!!!!!!!

~*~Skye~*~

That was great

Nicccceeeeeeeeeee