Anniversary (help)

I want to give this to my boyfriend on our 1 year anniversary...please help me perfect it by leaving a comment....it's a true story...

It was one year ago,
But I remember it to this day.

A memory I hold so close,
It will never fade away.

Tyler invited us to a show,
Les Mis at S.H.S,

I absolutely despise the play,
But because of you I said, "Yes!"

You see, I'd had a crush on you,
I'll admit, for a little while.

After all you were my closet friend,
Who could always make me smile.

But I never thought you'd date me,
I assumed I was just your friend,

And that you'd never,ever "like" me,
That it'd be that way till the end.

So during the show we snuggled,
Like we always tended to do.

But something was changing as the play went on,
Something between me and you.

My small teenage crush,
Was growing inside me,

I suddenly had a new, weird feeling,
For this boy sitting beside me.

I wasn't sure what was going on,
Or why I felt so strange.

But the second we got in the car,
My whole world began to change.

All I can remember were your eyes,
Still visible in the dark.

Staring straight into them,
Then inside I felt a spark.

We both leaned in in unison,
Eye's closing at the same time.

A new sensation ran through my body,
When I felt your lips against mine.

I'm not done...but how is it so far? Any help...please!