Comments : Ryan and Jane

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I know it's hard for u Emma, everything will be ok. she'll be alright. I'm definately praying for her, and i'm glad the c-section went ok. xox forever ur friend.
    -Snoo

  • Loved it, sorry about your sister. :(
    5/5

  • Hey hunni r u ok? stupid question!
    i pray to god your sister makes it through!
    im praying for you and your sister
    love mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry that this is based on true events, and I hope for the best for your sister.

    The poem was nicely written though, the flow wasn't rocky, and I really liked your rhyming, didn't seem forced to me. A really sad write, I just hope all goes well. Keep it up.

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Aww....so sad...it almost made me cry...of course i'll pray for her...stay strong...i loved the poem...5/5.

  • This is a gorgeous piece written in hard times. may the best come to your sister and her son. stnad tall, i know you can pull thru. i know this must be hard, a loved one of mine is currently in the hospital as well. i know where you're coming from. be strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Aww I'm a guy and even I wanted to cry. I wish you the best of luck and to just to let I will pray for you guys.

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That so sad! I'm wow. I think I'm gonna cry..
    Love you!
    Heather

  • 17 years ago

    by Aline

    I really don't know what to say, i wish that everything is fine now i swear. i am sure that my prayers are not late. i will surely pray for them :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this is the saddest and most touching poem I have read in a long time. It must have been heartbreaking to find out the possibility of your sister dying. I would hate knowing the fact you can lose someone, it hurts more than having them die unexpectedly. Anyways, this is a really good poem, and I enjyoed it. Thanks for the read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkend Angel

    The sad but beautiful. I love the way your wrote it. I hope your sister is ok..

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkend Angel

    The sad but beautiful. I love the way your wrote it. I hope your sister is ok..

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my...Great emotion within this poem.. Very strong. I really, really hope she's ok... Stay strong if she didn't make it.
    Take care.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Great feeling i love it i will keeep ur family in my thoughts

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Thanks so much I didnt expect so many replies and comments!

    Thank you SO much.

    She's on the mend and I hope she stays that way.

    I appreciate this SO much

    :D

    ~Emma
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by samara.jr

    Wow... i could feel the emotions.. godbless, i'll be praying for you and your family... :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fronz

    It is a relly sad poem but it comes from the heart and it has so much feeling, great poem by the way.
    I hope that both jane and baby ryan get through this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Awh. so sad. Im so sorry to hear about your sister, i hope your doing okay. the poem was wonderful your very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Oh jeez...i just want to let you know that after i read this, i prayed harder than ive ever prayed for ANYTHING before. This is an amazing and emotional poem. I hope everything works out! I would love to know what happened. I'm still praying for you! 5/5...hang in there. xo

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, that's great!