Death Of A Baby (true story about a family I know)

by Raychil   Aug 20, 2006


He was taken away so soon
A poor baby, only 1 month old
He experience a kidney failure,
A pain his body couldn't hold

The funeral was held today
So all could fully see
The little boy that lay so peaceful
Who barely had a chance to breathe

The children were in shock
After the shot to their first mother
Yes she lived but they still couldn't take
The death of their little brother

His mother couldn't control herself
She cried as her husband held her
They already had children from another
So why couldn't they have one together?

Could it have been more than just the kidneys?
Like how much they would smoke
That smell coming off them so strong
To make you almost choke

Could it have been the situation?
Not enough money for them all
The kids didn't always have much to eat
And the trailer is quite small

Still its too late now
The baby is in God's hands
Though the pain is still so great
They know God has his plans.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg!! thats great so peacfully sad but also perfectiant its just great and so very deep sorry for there loss but by any chance are the childrens name jake, mitcheal and ive forgoten the other name
    xoxroxyxox

  • 17 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    This is an awesome poem..im sorry about what happened, it must be horrible..you are a great writer though, keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by shahadah

    That was a great but sad poem.....keep doing wat u do

  • 17 years ago

    by FallenAngel44

    5/5 OMG! That is so sad! I like the fact that u don't try to dress things up with fancy language, that u just say it how it is. Pleex Check out some of my poems! Thanx

  • 17 years ago

    by Asingletear

    Thats real sad, reli feel for you and the family, there is no excuse for a baby to die, but i guess we don hae that choice to say who can live and who cant. brill poem.