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by DaddysLittlePrincess Aug 20, 2006
Love, romance /
**wrote this after a dream i had and it kinda bothered me that i never saw who the guy was so i wrote this**
You seemed to appear in my dreams one night
Allow me to tell you of one that just felt so right
I stood on a star-lit beach, alone
Leaning beneath a sky-high palm
Only the moon shone, revealing the unknown
So naive, I just couldn't remain calm
Something came toward me, lurking in the darkness
My hands began to shake, my mind in a race
I became so excited that I was almost breathless
This nervous feeling that I just could not erase
Appearing out of the shadows was my Superman
Time stood still, I was in your arms, where I belong
You're warm body against mine, hand in hand
Through the sands of time, we walked along
Night skies surrounded us as we floated above
Left in the world was only you and me
Guided by the stars, lifted up by love
We went to the moon and the stars, so many
While holding you, My Superman, so tight
You leaned in and whispered in my ear
"Princess, the stars are my witnesses, shining so bright
I'll love you til I die and you'll never have to fear"
My heart sunk as those words were spoken
A feeling of safety and comfort took over me
Those words seemed to be just the token
To piece my heart to what it used to be
I took a chance and whispered something back
"You shattered my protective shell
You gave me the things that I lacked
You make me better and for you I fell"
Someday this dream will come true
Because I learned that from you
by xo kisses xo
Great poem! i loved the rhyming...it must have been hard!
A great poem with some beautiful lines. Loved how every other line rhymed. Nicely done! Very genuine and sweet!
WOW I really liked this one. You are really great with all your work, I can truely relate to alot of your stuff.
by Kirsty palmer
Wow.. such a romantic and very unique poem, i loved the way you wrote it.. great write.. i hope you do find your superman ;)...5/5..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks..kirsty palmer xx