But they never forget,
always waiting for love's first kiss.
that was an awesome poem.. and im glad to hear that urs had arrived!

I love this poem, but not even close to being in the same book as how much i love YOU. *Kiss*

Brad

Awwwwwwwww......i lik the last line alot!! a 5/5 for me!!

Aww I absolutely loved this poem.. for some reason I thought it was going to be a sad ending, but was pleasantly surprised ;] very well written 5/5 xx

Had a sweet theme and started really strong but for me it fell a bit flat at the end. Guess I really am too old for fairy tales lol.

Aww that was a sweet poem, and you are very lucky you have found your Knight in Shining Armor. It seems like a little hypocritical when they no longer believe and tell their kids. Heh, but I'm sure the ones that fall in love tell the better story. Really nice piece. For some reason it reminded me of Shrek :P

This is a good poem that is killed by the last line.

You have the hope, the expectation, the disappointment then the hope for another and then to spite all of that you say you have your knight anyway. It doesn't make sense.

The rest of the poem is really quite clever though.

Awww thats so sweet!! :') I'm jealous >.< lol. Sometimes I wish my boyfriend will always be my Prince Charming instead of the occasional ass he is.. (like now) x.x lol

So very happy for you. Your loves shows in your poetry. :)

I SO agree with Bret....you killed it by the last line.