Poseidon

by jessel jane   Aug 21, 2006


The rippling waves... the gentle sounds
of wind had made me smile.
The clouds started to shed their tears;
I saw the warning of the skiy.

And then a sudden quake has come
that i fell down on my knees.
Racing winds and fearful waves;
I saw the rage of seas.

My tears were hidden by the rain.
the whirlpool coming on.
I stood to see the one beneath:
the god of sea___Poseidon.

Nature has betrayed me.
That god's eyes made me scream.
I then closed my weary eyes...
I woke up from my dream.

I hardly breath; i stood up.
I realized it's New Year's Eve.
I went out of my cabin
of this ship--- I want to leave.

I heard him coming nearer... nearer
My mind shouted deep inside.
My heartbeats racing faster... faster
My soul just wanted to hide.

Too late to escape this god's anger;
For death is holding on.
Nature has just betrayed me...
the god of sea___Poseidon.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    I'm with Chels... You described Poseidon magnificently well!! A wonderful piece, that kept my undivided attention.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    After reading this now I want to go and watch that movie! It was really good...there were a few spelling errors, just like capitalization and what not, but its ok because you had amazing description that the readers won't even notice it because you describe Poisedon excellently!
    nice write!
    Chell

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I agree, there was a lot of beautiful imagery. Also a lot of descriptions, and you created a really nice scenario. Well done.