OMG!! this poem is soo awsome!!! i lik it alot!!! its sooo sad....a 5/5 for me!!!!!!!

Great poem, so deep and full of emotion, it took me to my past as i can relate to it, so greatly written, i like it alot,
overall a great poem

Loved the message of this poem. So true, so true. Overall, a well written piece.

A very meaningful poem. It had great words, very good imagery. It was beautifully written, I loved it very much. Brilliant
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Ok i got a new faverit hehehe. i like this one a lot too

Good rhyming and lots of alliteration and assonance. kept me intrested all the way through.

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As always, your flow is perfect and your way of words are enchanting. keep it up

The moral of this poem is so true and overall this poem made me very emotional. it is a great write i hope your proud

best wishes
sarah

Aww. It's horribly sad...But in a good sort of way lol. I really liked how you managed to put the questions in. It really made the poem worth reading. I also liked how well the flow went. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Beautifully written.. Your words have a way of reaching out and touching the heart and soul of the reader.