This was a really good poem Nat. The flow and rhymes were great!.. I really liked how you described an object, and used that object as an action. That's the basics for a 'Personification'. And you used it well. Your vocabulary is expanding. It really does at to the poem. You are definitely maturing with your poetry. Keep on writing Nat, you have a lot of talent.

Wow great poem. Excellent rhyming and the flow was spot on.

Wow... this is just one big collection of personification... lol... it's great... i like it more then chocolate cake on a sunday afternoon with the pope....

Beautiful job. Nice flow and perfect ending. I liked the "blind" part.

5/5

this poem is perfect.
the flow and description of your emotions or the person your tlaking about were brilliant.

Keep up this work.
It's great.
~Emah
5/5

Hey darl a touching piece. great use of words. xx

Very profound.... your emotions and thoughts run deep

Very good job! I loved it! your rhyming scheme was perfect and you didn't drag your point on and on. I really loved it!

This is a really beautiful poem .
The flow and rhymes are awesome .
I love yur choice of words . Huge variety of vocab (:
Love it lots .
..ღ__MiNDYY

This one just blew me away. Woww.

5/5, definitely.