Iam speechless...i have been reading this poem for the last hour and still i want to read it over and over..........if word could come i would tell u how much this means to me..........its beautiful..beyond anything else goran..but i never thought of it..i mean i truelly never thought...thank you so much for everything...for ur wonderful comments for u always being there...for ur friendship...for sharing this wonderful works of yours...i have never known anyone in my life like u and i believe i will never know another one...u r a gift from above..and who ever readys ur works would know wat i mean....
Another emotional poem, I dont know what poem you have responded but whatever it is, you have done a great job writing about a night in your life.
I wish I could write like you,
I wish I could explain my feelings like you do.
your poems are so great and this person is so lucky who got your love.
Again i am speechless facing your words and thoughts.
I must admit it, now when I read your love poem I see everything as love in my own daily life, and IN PAST, when you use to write sad poems I use to cry all the time and from that I know I have fallen in love with your words.
This poem was another great move by the best writer.
keep up the great work and keep writing more because I do check your page at least ten times a day to read a new one.
Very beautiful write. I think this is one of your best. Great flow.
16 years ago
by bOlly danCer
Hey wonderful poem....very friendly...oh thankyou so much for my new poem....that poem took me 2mintues to write...i was just thinkin how i really felt and it all came out on paper...i wana get it published along wit sum of my other poems...hopefully i can :) 5/5 cant wait to read more of your poems :)
First this poem was better than I thought it was. Yes it did have a romantic feel even though it is a friendship poem, and yes he feelings cmae over the reader making this one of the top friendship poems I've read on the site. However, I would suggest fixing up some of your tense changes that switch from present to past.
I think there are a few little things you can do to brush this poem up some more.
Firsty I'd edit the first stanza to fall in line with the second and third.
In my dream I will see you.
In my dream I would see you.
(the poem is told in past tense and should follow it through out.)
I would swap the last two stanzas to give the poem a stronger and more final ending. Also I would change "When I was there near you." to When I was there with you. With is so much more personal than you and gives a higher sense of intimacy.
Hey! Mr. Goran! how r u?
Well i love this poem...i can relate a bit of it! The opening stanza was like awesome! it really did capture me! and the ending was like so perfect!well the whole poem was like amazing! im sure alot of people can relate to this! very well written!
Well done on a great job!
I thought this was a very good poem. For the most part the flow was excellent and I thought it was a very emotional and well written poem. I loved it a lot, and thought it was a great topic and just a great poem overall.