Hye there great poetry. *shay Thats all i can say.

Omg are you kidding shay? it's not great it's wonderful, splendid, breath-taking! i mean it is beyond great!!
i really liked your poem.. first i thought that it would be carved on a tree or something! but on you back! wow.. i mean i would never think of that! YOUR CREATIVE!!
your choice of words are great.. although i had to look up some words...
so basicly i really liked your poem..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

P.S. can you chek out my poems and comment and rate on them plz..
THANKYOUUU

This is deep...

Another splendid poem by a truly amazing artist. your way with words is just so magnificent.... i liked this short poem that told so much in so few words... keep on writing dude... ur amazing

A.