Well written

This is a really dark, but beautiful poem. i love it. good job

THe backbone of the poem is AMAZING! Some words are mis-spelled and you might want to think some of your word choice....but all in all I loved it......it seriously touched me :D

I dnt knw but i found it differnt...just the way it was written its really gd though kept me wanting to read more hehe
hope its not true
keep up the gd job
p.s thanks for da comment:D
xoox

Nice poem very enjoyable, great write
5/5

Omg :( thats realy sad :(
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keep writein cuz ur a awesome writer

4/5

the content of the poem is awesome and i love what its about

the 4/5 is just how you worded it, its not what i believe is 5/5 but i get strict somtimes so yah XD XD

XD your welcome but to warn

get a pathetic mistake or tragic to read ur poems they will tell u how to fix them XD =3

OMG OMG OMG!! THAT IS SO EFFING AWESOME DUDE I LOVE IT! it soo well written the flow was a tiny lil bit rocky in the middle but then it was okay! Man this is soo sad loved the ending...it nearly made me cry love it LOTS dude but there was only one mistake i spotted which was :
mother doesnt give me anything more thana peice of beard
(Mother doesn't give me anything more than a piece of breaD)
Sorry im a bit annoyin on that kinda stuff...but as i said b4 i lovd it! so very well written! I loved it! KEEP IT UP!
can't wait 4 more 4m you!
Take Care
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*-D*K-*- aka (a.pathetic.mistake)

OMG!!that was so f---ing cool!!!I absouletly love it!!its so sad and i LOVED the ending!!I love like all of your poems!!so check mine out sometime if oyu get the chance!thanks bunches,
Much love,
~rachel~

It's so good, but it's making me shake, I'm scared now. Aweomse Keenan!!

Wow thta was intense, i lvoed it..whats with the #?? anyways exceellnt work, nice energy.

issa

I am amazed at how well u can write...this skill will take u far...i am speechless and blown away...

xoxo-ashleigh-xoxo

This is a great poem keenan, long but very good, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

5/5. this is really dark and sad and i can feel your pain if its true then i understand, keep it up this one is my new favorite.

Aww I pity the kid in the poem :( well written! good job!

I LOVE IT U KNOW I DO bubi-harley