Very nice poem

This is so simple and honest and beautiful-it says everything in so few lines.It says so much.Excellent write.

GaryJ

Awesome. Very meaningful.

That was sweet n nice poem 5/5

Simple, but very powerful. Well written, and excellent word chioce. Keep up the good work and thanks for all the comments.4/5

That's really sweet...

Josie

Wow, this one is so beautiful! I like it from the beginning to the end. The wording and the atmosphere in this piece are superb.
Well done, you deserve more then 5/5

Very unique and interesting poem. Form of this piece is excellent and original. This poem is also very touching and emotions are expressed greatly. 5/5

This is absoutly amazing poem, it is now im my favourites, i love the way you made a short and simple poem express so much feeling and emotion.

I LOVED THIS!

It was so simple and sweet that it worked perfectly together. Amazing job on this one ... it has to be my fave from you. It was short sweet and to the point while it held such meaning and power in each line. Well done *5/5*

Wow, this is short, sweet, and simple. Great word usage and flow was just amazing. 5/5

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