GASP!!! sis!!! thank u soooo much for this poem!!! u r truly my angel in disgues!!!!!!! i LOVED it!!!!! dont worry..ill get better...ill always be here!! i can beat ana and mia!! no worries!!
i love u!!!!

Awhe, that's sad Hun. It was so well written though, and the flow was amazing. I loved the first three stanzas amazing.

The poem was written alright, it was not the best but surely not the worst. You could have put forth more emotions into the writing yet the message you are sending to what seems like a good friend is really heartfelt.

Awww, that is so sad. Honestly, I hope all turns out well. Keep writing beautifully as you do.

Awh, that was so sweet and yet sad.. Well done sweetie! The flow was good most of the time although it did have a few awkward spots.. The descriptions explained the situation well and used nice details..

Other will too soon
^ Should be "Others"

If I didn't have you
^ This line didn't sound quite right, maybe you should add in an extra word or something..

Nicely done, keep it up 5/5

This is such a beautiful poem hun, with so much emotion in it too, your freind is very lucky to have you. i hope your friend gets better soon. As for you hun i hope things are ok (well not ok but as ok as poss), if not i am always here if you need someone. Thankyou for ur last comment meant a lot, i love all of your poems u have so much talent dont ever forget xxxx

Liked, liked, liked!!!

Icic, now I get who d other poem is referring 2, sorry ya, been long since i check on u, nice poems anyway...

Great job. Once again, your rhythm was perfect. Your descriptions of the topic was clearly written too.

Awwwww........this is sad.....another 5/5 for me..

I liked that, not alot of ppl write something like that i really liked it it was different while i read it i try to anylize it...
but it has so many meanings to it ,
5/5

Well I know all I do is compliment, but you deserve it, you put reality to a new hight, your amazing

-mello