Last breath

The phone rings to tell her to come to the hospital
the women on the other end says
her boyfriends condition is cridical
she walks in the room to see him lying there
sits beside him in a chair
and grabs his hand
\"your so cold,baby \" tears well up in her eyes
she bends her head down and begins to cry
she lifts her head watching him breath
he looks at her, surprised she kisses him on the cheek
she says \"baby youll get better just wait and see\"
he weakly says \"i love you its my time to go\"
she starts to cry\"baby, no\"
as she watches him take his last breath
she crys \"no your all i have left\"
the line goes flat the doctor comes in
tells her she has to go
she walks home cralws in bed
crys herself to sleep
she wakes up like it was a bad dream
her feet touch the cold floor
in the middile of the night
she walks for the door
she opens it to have the breeze
blow back her hair
she begins to walk going no where
a blank look on her face
shes gone with no trace
she stops and closes her eyes
just to hide all the pain inside
she opens them as tears run down her face
she begins to run away
she gets to an open feild
and falls to her knees with such grace
she puts her hands over her face and starts to cry
looks up and screams \"God why?\"
tears fall fast as she yells up to him
\"why did you take him from me,you didnt give him a chance
you took him he was so young we had alot of plans
he was going places and taking me with him
now hes gone but ill be with him again\"
she reaches in her pocket and pulls out a blade
crys to the sky\"im coming baby\"
she slowly falls to the ground
shes slowly fading away
he was all she had
so she took her last breath

not my best poem plez rate and comment